Rita tried to say something, but she couldn't. The family think Lincoln is bad luck so they ban him from attending their activities.. Synopsis. Leni asked, an eyebrow raised, confused. But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! [The softball playoffs. No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane | The loud house fanart DeviantArt Protect. TLH: Scoop Snoop (Alternate Ending) by LuisLoudestFan on DeviantArt "No need," another voice was heard saying, everyone turned and saw Jeffrey, the spa manager standing in the doorway, glaring at all of them, "I got staff to pack all of your stuff into your bags and bring it downstairs when I was informed you were still here by Maddie, one of my front desk clerks." "We promised you wouldn't notice we were there while had a nice relaxing weekend, right?" SEE YOU NEVER!" Luna: That was rockin'. "Huh. Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. As Maddie looked at the devastation, she thought back to the parents. I spread one little white lie just to get more free time because i cant afford to come to so many actvities all in one go! NOBODY!!! ", Lincoln: (to his parents) "What kind of parents lock their own child out? Also please don't flame me. This feels like a bad episode from a show thats running out of ideas. After a few moments of static, a female voice was heard on the other end, "Hello, Felix. Incredible from The Incredibles on the cover. Lucy shouted, "WE DREAD GOING TO VISIT YOU AND DREAD LOOKING AT YOUR GROSS FACE!" ", Rita: "I think we heard enough. No Such Luck - Alternate ending - The Loud House Encyclopedia You don't care about me, you think I'm nothing, but a thing, you care about no one, but yourselves, you never wanted a boy, you don't have feelings, you all feel NOTHING ANYMORE!!! (yet another author interruption: I know this sounds harsh, but in all fairness, that is a pretty stupid thing to do and the reason behind it doesn't help). We are no longer grounded to the room. Im sick of everything thats happened to me! Okay this episode has already been hated enough you can pretty much type in the rants for 'No such luck' and there will be a lot of those, I too hated this e. It centers around an Alternate Timeline involving the events of the infamous episode "No Such Luck", where the Loud family thought that Lincoln was bad luck. Lori yelled. "And we're glad they did," Lisa added, "Because thanks to the man that stopped by as well as a woman at the front desk, we were able to learn that you and dad apparently couldn't keep your own promise." After that, Rita began crying, a member of her family that she loved despite everyone else hating her had just disowned her and her family. Lucy. I'M A STUPID, SENSELESS BULLY!!! I have truly failed the term 'scientist'. Didn't you say you would never kick us out? Two more squirrels collide into each other and miss the catch. ", Luna: "No, you were right. Rita: WE ARE THE MOST DISGRACEFUL PEOPLE EVER!!! They kick and punch and claw at each other for several minutes until Lincoln picks Lynn up.). What if one of the neighbours saw Lincoln when he was sleeping outside and called the police? Plot. As she pondered what he meant, she felt the room shake. She pointed to the back row of seats. They sold his furniture and forced him to wear a squirrel costume to bring them good luck.) Lincoln: "Did anything bad happen, something life threatening that I would be deemed 'bad luck'? Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Loud House, No Such Luck sequel - YouTube You think you can just say sorry after making me look like a freak and everything will be fine!?! He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. QUIET! I demand an explanation! "But, as usual," Lincoln added, walking towards his parents, "We didn't and as a result you got angry and grounded us." Lincoln: yeah. There's no need to shout. As she started getting cleaning supplies to try and restore the lobby to a sense of glory, Maddie thought to herself, 'If the kids did this to the lobby on their way to find their parents. She turned to face her parents, a massive glare on her face, and Lola added, "And it's all mom and dad's fault." Just a heads up, there are moments of severe anger and shouting, so if you don't like either of these then I'd recommend reading something else. I let my pride get the best to me! We feel so ashamed! Youve made your point! I hate the fact that you never take responsibility! I hate softball! I'm supposed to be the most special Loud of all. WE DESERVE TO BE HURT!!!! Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. No such Luck: Repair not Revenge, a loud house fanfic | FanFiction Okay look, answer me these questions! You can never come back. After that, for the remainder of the car ride, nothing was heard but the sounds of Rita's crying and her tears dropping from her face. Lynn Sr.: KIDS, please! We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." Except for Lynn). And it wasn't just her, everyone in the lobby felt it and they looked around, wondering if there was an unexplainable earthquake coming. She then added, "I was just talking to my boyfriend when suddenly the sliding door closes and I can't get back in. Lynn pitches and the opposing batter hits the ball right back her, knocking her socks, shoes, and hat off and making her spin in mid-air before landing on the ground. He staggers inside, weak and collapsed. (Shouts) Put the head back on before we get stung by a jellyfish! Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. "Yeah, brah." Lynn has a bruised cheek and the rest are all still coated in muck and wet from the sea. Lola finished with. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. I hate the fact that I was ever related to you monsters! Lincoln: Girls! "We just wanna tell you how much we HATE YOU, YOU GROSS UGLY THING!" That was my favourite bat! Leni: Linky, dont shout. No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane Cartoons Comics Funny Comics Loud House Rule 34 The Loud House Lincoln The Loud House Fanart Loud House Characters Funny Comic Strips Movies Coming Out Sonic And Amy More information . I don't want this stupid bunch of brats in my life anymore! Leni: (sniffles) I miss him so bad. Lori said afterwards, knowing that everyone would've been confused by her talk. loud. Lincoln: No! Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. . I'm not. 5 months of research ruined. (They pile into Vanzilla and go searching for him). User blog:AlexKawa/Alternative Ending: No Such Luck | The Loud House after they let go, Lincoln notices Lynn standing with her head down.) The entire lobby was destroyed, couches were stomped beyond recognition, lamps and desks were thrown and broken, hotel luggage carts were somehow damaged beyond repair and some people were hurt (another author interruption sorry: not severely, mind you, but enough that they were going to feel pain tomorrow and the next few days). 'What did he mean there's a massive storm heading her way?' "WELL I HATE ALL OF YOU, TOO!" I do not own the Loud . "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing. Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! It's no fun without Lincoln! He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window. WE WERE NEVER PARENTS!!!! ", Lola: (slightly sad) "Well, I probably would've before, but, from now on, you come to my pageants when you want to, and if not, it's fine by me. "Same here." Linky was right, the softball games are really stupid!!! "So just so you can remember clearly," Lincoln started with, before he and his sisters got red in the face, "WE HATE YOU!" Lincoln: "Thanks, Ms. Mulligan. I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! We know we don't deserve it, but we hope you can forgive us! Fanfiction - No Such Luck Extention. ], Lynn: "Lincoln, you could've tripped and cost us the entire game! ", Leni: (with a sad look on her face) "No. An alternate ending to Underratedheros story, "Requiem For A Loud". When they saw the lobby, they knew the bill was going to be expensive. Maybe I should just stop playing softball for a while. "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. They are looking very heartbroken.). ", [The family and Bobby cheer for Lynn as she makes her run around the field. Meatbrain here and her dumb softball, this never would have happened! I hate that you put your own lame pride and wants above everything else! ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? The Loud House: The Loud Luck (Rewrite) - DeviantArt I hate pageants! We wont! They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. Guess they forgot to lock the windows. Loud House Alternate Ending: Out of the Picture by . The Loud siblings appeared in the lobby, completely red in the face, as angry as a bull seeing red and they looked ready to destroy everything in their path. *Sniff* I thought he liked our things! Lincoln: "Coming!" Knowing they sealed the deal and there's no way they will ever have to go back to Aunt Ruth's, Lincoln said, "Well so long, freakshow. I know remaking this episode has been done to death, so this is probably the only alternate ending I'm going to do for this episode. We don't need to get violent here. Sweaty Pants here! We don't know what we were thinking! No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. Dont threaten your little sister! ", Lincoln: "No. #The loud house #lincoln loud #lori loud #leni loud #luna loud #Luan Loud #Lynn Loud #Lucy Loud #lana loud #lola loud #lisa loud #lily loud #the loud house headcanons #the loud . That question caused all the sisters to become shocked and then become angry. Ive come to many grave-digging events and cemeteries with you! Everyone finally realized that what they've done. Why do these three buffoons have the room. Lynn: *Gasp* NOOOOOO!!!!! "Although," Lana, a six-year old tomboy wearing a baseball, added, "if it helps we tried to fix it." We didn't just barge into the room. I do it almost everyday, and it'snot that I hate going to them or don't want to support you, butsometimes, I wanted to take a break form all that, you know,unwind. the family opens the door to see a ticked off Lincoln. What kind of parents would do that? Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. One Squirrel tosses the bat right at Lincoln by accident. In. Lincoln: Enjoy your life in suits! She playfully rolled her eyes. (to the viewers) "Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have some fun with my family." He even then flips over and smashes the trophy case. We need it! I came to your game to support you, not just because you threatened me with your bat. I've gotten complaints of loud noises, stuff breaking and a possible brawl breaking out in one hotel room. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." Also it is part Satire, so most of the behavior of the Characters appearing here may not be their usual self's. If you like all the Revenge-Fics who like to torment Lincoln's family and/or present his . Everyone winced at the final words out of Lola's mouth, but not the woman on the other end. So expect a bill in the mail." Lola: *Gasp* My lovely car! (He picks up the squirrel suit, jumps up and down on the head and starts ripping the chest)", Lynn: HEY! Lincoln: (off-screen) Where are you going Luce? Who do you think you are, calling us names and insulting us like that!? I hate concerts! Lucy: So, that's it then? Leni: Linky.(sniffles).please don't do this to us. Lynn Sr.: Son..we never stopped loving you..we do care about you Lori: Don't hurt us like this..we're your familywe want you to be with us. Lana: We didn't mean to ruin your life..(sniffles).we just wanted to avoid bad luck..we're so sorry we went about it all wrong Luna: We get it bro.you were never bad luck..we ruined everything for youthere is no such thing as luckwe'll never live this down.. Lola: You can't hurt your own family like this.. Lincoln: You all hurt me first! You love baseball. It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. Ruth shouted at the top of her lungs. ", [It's revealed to be Lincoln in the runabout costume], Lincoln:[to the viewers] "My plan is simple: I watch the game in disguise, and when the Squirrels win, everyone will see I'm not bad luck. Wow, Lincoln, I'm really sorry. Hahahaha! Rita: You're all just angry with each other, when we get home, we'll talk about this properly. I HATE THIS!!! You locked me out of my room, sold all my furniture and made me into a thing!! No pun intended. i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. Lincoln: I dont think I told you I was bad luck. Lincoln: And, you locked me out of my room. Luan: (tearful) We'll never be able to show our faces in public again. I dont want to support you psychos! You going to dress me up as a chipmunk or a donkey!? Lola: If it wasn't for Miss. "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" I can't believe I just hit one of my own sisters! Just a heads up, this ending is going to feature a lot of yelling from the siblings and behavior/actions that some of you may believe that I'm representing the siblings in a bad light. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. it is true that the Duke's actions were noble and his heart was stout, but he held doubts of his. The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck - DeviantArt ", Lincoln: "Well what are we standing here for? Can you please just come down here? Luna spots Lincoln). Looking at her parents in shock, she said, "You got us kicked out because you decided to go skinny dipping?" ", Pep:[dully] "Oh, I have that effect on people. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Maybe I should just quit the team. Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. The Loud House: Suite and Sour (Alternate Ending) - DeviantArt Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. "But you know what's not fair?" She whistles for Fangs. "Which room number is it?" YOU'LL BE HAPPY TO KNOW YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT DEALING WITH ME OR MY CATS OR MY DISGUSTING PUDDING OR MY BUNIONS ANYMORE! Lincoln: Now THAT'S bad luck for you, you brainless nitwits!! "Aunt Ruth, please reconsider," Rita started with, before she interrupted by Ruth. Lynn Sr.: Look, son, families will have bad days every now and than. We know you are!". Lisa: I was a fool to fall for it all, I swear. "The Loud House" No Such Luck/Frog Wild (TV Episode 2017) - IMDb YOU'RE THE WORST FAMILY TO EVER LIVE!!!! "Well mom, you know what I think?" The siblings glared at her for a moment but saw she had a point, it didn't make sense to ground her or Lily for that matter, she was a baby, anything she did wasn't entirely her fault. Lynn Sr.: NO! Do I mean nothing to you? Status Update. Let's go! ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" (They arrive home. She started pacing the room, or more specifically around the couch. I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! Luan: Maybe these silly superstitions werent such a good idea. YOU ARE NOT BAD LUCK!!! Lori was trying to figure out a way back into the hotel room. ", [Later, they arrive back in their house.]. The fact that you locked me out of my own home all because of superstitions ithurt, it really hurt it felt like a jab inmy heart." Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. At least this thick skin won't let me down! 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. ", Lincoln: "Thanks. You took it too far! "Mr. Security Officer, if I may," his attention went down to that of a four-year old girl with shaggy brown hair, glasses and a green sweatshirt, she pointed to the three other men in the room, and said, "I'd like to point out that these three imbeciles welcomed themselves into our room for no good reason. NOTE: I am aware this episode has been overly bashed to death. "Yes, you are right," the woman said, "It appears that your parents were caught swimming in the pool after hours." [The crowd cheers, the Loud family gasps in shock] Lynn: "No! Some blonde girl in a green dress gave us a room key and told us to enjoy our time here." After one loss, she claims that Lincoln is bad luck. "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude.